All Comments on 'Sophia Pt. 04'

To Anonymous, Sophia Is the Italian actress Sophia Loren.

It’s a shame that this story wasn’t finished, it was just starting to get interesting, although Don and Maria almost had me screaming in frustration at their total inability to communicate.

Any suggested finishing FTDS

Come on man. How could you do this to us? Please finish the story. Anybody.

Really really want a proper finish after investing so much in this

Please please someone finish it properly

1 star. By second page - hell, by part 3 - I started cheering AGAINST Maria. The author tried really hard to make her likeable, but she comes off 75% as self-absorbed annoying brainless brat. The only redeeming quality is 25% which is caring about Don's kids.

I keep seeing comments saying that CastleStone is dead? Where did that info come from, and is it verified? Very sad if true. I'm glad to see that another author took it upon themselves to finish this story, I look forward to an ending

Great story, would love to see an ending. Don’t think that’s gonna happen.

Who took over?

Very disappointing to wade through so much only to find no ending.

If the poor author is no longer with us, I apologise for whining.

northlander has written an ending

No ending?

Unfortunately, the author died in 2009 so this will remain one of the unfinished great stories like Joe Brolly's "Genie Chronicles". However, northlander wrote a continuation ...

I hate when you have to read four different parts of 10 pages each and then you stop and say oh to be continued huh

Thank You. This story is a Masterpiece.

Here is northlanders continuation:

https://www.literotica.com/s/sophia-continued-pt-01

Thanks to whichever Anon pointed this out.

Only death will stop the ending of these two living forever. Thank you for posting conclusion Anon and verstek. 5/5

Nato_

I see there is a continuation shown by others. If you're gone, no point in commenting on the story proper. But three nights wading through this was enough. I'll see if the continuation buttons it up and puts a bow on it.

Wasn't the greatest story I have ever read but better than most. Just wish I could have read the conclusion

When will there be the final part of this story? I can't wait to read more!

5/5!

Hoping that a conclusion is coming...

Too bad that this is probably all we will ever get. I hope the author is ok.

Considering the date these stories were posted I doubt we will get a conclusion

https://www.literotica.com/s/sophia-continued-pt-01

NorthLander wrote a conclusion for the story.

I'm surprised that this story hasn't slipped into polyamory.

More Helga!

Besides being un-finished the story makes unfounded assumptions about men. Look short of being a prostitute…..and then even that for many men can be an acceptable past…..a woman’s ‘past’ is not the critical part for men. What is critical is her sexual behavior AFTER HE MEETS HER. Before is another universe. This is true usually for both sexes. Also past sexual proficiency is irrelevant with new partners as only an open ear and mind determine the quality of the match. The opposite anatomy and a few porn films inform the pair of everything they may ever need to know. A virgin and a prostitute can thus become a spectacular sexual match in just a few weeks. R. H.

haha funny how long the build up is on this story!!! it is just absurd the stupidity of Maria to not communicate her feelings and past history not to mention that both Don and her had to have some kind of sexual apetite beyond masturbation. Sad the author passed without his own ending and real "climax"

where is the endiinng

Wonderful story, extremely well written and so much fun. Very sad about the author.

Boring,

You wrote a wonderful piece. Posted in 2009, have you figured out the ending after 14 years or still working on it.

Another INCOMPLETE series. What a waste of my time.

https://www.literotica.com/s/sophia-continued-pt-01

NorthLander wrote a conclusion for the story.

Thank you NorthLander for finishing this story.

I really tried but there is too much BS going on in this epic. Could be a great story but definitely needs to be properly edited.

Great read! It has been a long time since this last part was submitted! Can't wait for the conclusion. Please finish it!!

I eagerly await the next instalment of this story

Great story up till now but I think we are going to have to take Roscoe to you for leaving us hanging.................so get with it and finish the damn story! Please!!!

WTF ....where is the next chapter ..... ( LOL)

It's a great story but the prepubescent parrying and avoidance and preteen angst two fully grown adults attracted to each other are having is wearying.

Author passed away, read alt ending by another writer:

Here is northlanders continuation:

https://www.literotica.com/s/sophia-continued-pt-01

Aargh! Unfinished? Damn!

I'm enjoying this story, but I'm starting to doubt that Maria is the woman for Don. Their constant manipulation of him,the grooming,then the sabotage of his dates outside of their cadre. Then if he does finally get the object of his obsession the lovely and generous Maria,then he's going to find out that she has had several promiscuous periods of her life in which she has had more partners than his own sank wife did. For the one woman man Don this would be nay impossible to overcome, I mean he will try, but can that demon ever be truly exercised from his mind? She's written as a quality woman no doubt, but I think a beautiful lady with a high body count and a proclivity for manipulation is not an ideal match for the MC.

It’s horrible that he’s passed on I would of loved to read more of his stuff he was a fantastic writer loved the ways his words flowed and his style

"What we have here, is a Failure to communicate..."

How can such beautiful passionate people fail to sense the rapport they have and want desperately to explore in intimate ways?

A conflicted plot device?

If would to see a submission that keeps this story going

Check out SOPHIA CONTINUED PT. 01 by northlander

Thoroughly enjoyed it all.Such a shame it can't be finished.

Son of a b***h!!!

Another unfinished abandoned series?

So disappointing.

I agree with an earlier comment. A woman who is the scarlet woman with man after man can't tell someone that she likes him and wants to have a relationship? It's just silly. The first chapter was good after that. It was just a soap opera moving in a snail's pace, And nothing really happening.