by Alice_Nicol
Part 15 of this piece all Peter, yet despite near not stop Herculean efforts the sex came across erotically flat; words/descriptions there but did not feel the intensity/passion expected in “Sophia’s World”. Maybe me. Part 16 a fair amount of background/set up, which flowed well, though only took a line or two for Sophia to agree to do porn — why not, she is adventurous; perfect way to get the feel of the company she’s visiting for business. Loved the fun/witty phrases/puns we’ve come to expect/enjoy when in her world: “If she became lost in passion, that was a different thing entirely. That would be in character. For her, at least!” Or during sex her revealed clitoris likened to meringue. The porn setting sex near perfect Sophia; nice mesh of porn and real passion, though thoughts of making a baby seemed odd — maybe simply adding to the fantasy. Love this character; looking forward to more Hollywood exploits (?).
Like migbird, I enjoyed a hearty chuckle when Sophia jumped at the chance of doing porn. There again, we all knew she was going to be up for it, so why not?