by Eutopia
ummmmm... I choose Chika! He sounds really sweet. Although Hui is a very close second. It would be nice to have more character developement with the concubines.
the back story is very insightfull but not to long.good job.and the fact that she's not just the average girl is nice.I personally think that she admit she's on the plump side and is o.k with that makes her very very sexy.and one piece of advice and this is just my opinion if she gives her sisters there comeuppane don't have be like them when or if she does.
Have them take turns all night long. Maybe into the next day.