All Comments on 'Sophie's Bodypainted'

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daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 5 years ago
Hot and Erotic

Well written and arousing. I personally find body-painting to be highly erotic. When the male penis is properly incorporated, even more so. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story, one small issue

I found this to be incredibly erotic and a great piece of writing. That said, Saffron's name changes to Sapphire halfway through. Still, 5 stars!

BigBeanieBigBeanieover 5 years ago
Tigers are native to India.

You wouldn't see one during a gap year exploring Africa. Also if the tiger Sohpie supposedly watched was Saffron, then what / who is Sapphire? A potential five star story doesn't reach its potential through lazy research and proofreading.

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