All Comments on 'Sophie's Invitation'

loved it and want more

Nice story! I'd love to read the sequel!

Clever, sweet, concise, intriguing.

Thanks for the positive comments. So, here's the deal. I put two versions of this story up as part of the 750 word challenge. Once the challenge is over I'll chose the one which did best and write it up as a full story . . . I already have ideas as to how to fill in the gaps that 750 words leaves out.

What if the alternate version is even better?

Six stars?

A story of what could’ve been handled well in just 750 words

This started well, but the 750 word limit meant you couldn't expand on it. I am looking forward to reading work hard, play harder now though!