All Comments on 'Sore Loser Ch. 01'

It's a simple vignette, but AmiKerrigan captures the emotion, experience, and even personality of her protagonist. Nice use of language and imagery without cliche. As a reader you feel both the eroticism of the situation and the disgust. Nicely done.

First rate! I love your take on her conflicted emotions. Very sexy. Thanks for posting.

I am not that big on the BJ theme but the sorry is very very written.

I hope there is a "next game!"

The best story I've read on here in years. Holy shit.

Excellent writing. You take us inside Ami's mind and emotions as she is honoring her wager -- a wonderful example of showing, not telling. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

I'll look forward to the next chapter!

The best story that I have read in a very long time. Articulate and beautiful writing. Look forward to many more.

Great story!

And wasn't a cuckold story either.

I'm sad the story seems to be over, but glad you kept it up. It's the hottest series on this site. Thanks for sharing it!