by AmiKerrigan
I'm sad the story seems to be over, but glad you kept it up. It's the hottest series on this site. Thanks for sharing it!
The best story that I have read in a very long time. Articulate and beautiful writing. Look forward to many more.
Excellent writing. You take us inside Ami's mind and emotions as she is honoring her wager -- a wonderful example of showing, not telling. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
I am not that big on the BJ theme but the sorry is very very written.
First rate! I love your take on her conflicted emotions. Very sexy. Thanks for posting.
It's a simple vignette, but AmiKerrigan captures the emotion, experience, and even personality of her protagonist. Nice use of language and imagery without cliche. As a reader you feel both the eroticism of the situation and the disgust. Nicely done.