by AislingSpinner
You describe a woman's height of 5'5" as "very petite". The average height of US women is 5'5"! She is not "very petite", she is not "petite", she is "average height"!!!
Just finished reading both chapters, and I must say that I look forward to the next installment immensely! I've always been a fan of escapism, particularly with respect to dreams, so the idea of a dream of love coming true hooks me right away. I hope the next part comes soon!