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I flipped a car once on black ice. The 65 Mustang car flipped around the telephone pole without hitting it. I was

Retread.

Is there a difference between this one and "Boots"?

Non-Erotic

Nice story. Wrong category.

It takes 2 working together to succeed. Thanks for your writing.

very good story. no one was burned or destroyed by a act of infidelity.

Very well written, almost made me feel like I was in that car with him. And when he brought up the biting bugs it made my skin crawl a little. It reminded me of a not-so-good time in my life. Thanks for a great story, Slirpuff.

5/5

Superb . Loved it.

I wish there were more such stories on this site.

Well written.

Cute. I loved it. The Bear approves. 5 stars. I hope that's the least he ever has to go through. And daughters have a whole different way of getting what they want, DADDY!!! God luck.

The BEAR

Hanging from my seatbelt was truly torture, it ruptured my large intestine and i ended up with a bag on my belly and it reminds me not to do stupid things over a stupid argument just because i was stupid. She left me while i was in the hospital for 10 weeks. My life it back together and i find things to laugh over once again. This was a good story and talked about the suffering very well.

5 big stars! Slurpuff is an excellent writer and this was really well done.

No way would a selfish materialistic person that went from “I’ll get daddy to pay for them” straight to “why did I even marry you?” return a purchase. They were living almost pay check to pay check before the wreck, afterwards no matter how good the insurance there would be thousands of dollars in debt with the deductible and the remaining balances after insurance paid its part. Add to that a car payment and higher car insurance. Also after using up sick days and vacation time, it goes to medical leave which is at best 80% pay. They were just scrapping by before their fight, no way would that not get behind on regular monthly bills. This couple will just end up getting divorced over their financial situation.

What version of the iPhone did he have that it had power for three days without being charged?

What a cunt, this was neither cute or sweet. When she said "why did I ever marry you" when she wasn't getting her way about the fckn boots, that spoke volumes about her character. Yeah I know we all say things we regret when we're pissed off, but to go right for the "why did I marry you", fuck that. She valued the boots more than her marriage. It'll only get worse over the years to come. Run away now while you still can SMFH

You do the mental anguish and suffering very well, trust me, i know. No seat belt is easy to take off with the opposing hand. I hung from mine 4 days and ruptured my intestines. its been a long road in healing still after 3 years. for some strange reason i still love that woman.

Only some guy who has struggled to provide an honest decent life would understand. Real work. Not banking or stock brokerage or politics, but real work is grossly under compensated. When my mom visited and snooped in my wife's closet, she gasped "holy mackerel, she has 14 pair of purple shoes! I never even had one!?!" The end is wrong. He should have moved on because his wife would never change. His earnings would be continually be eaten up and he will die a pauper.

This was a good one, with a very happy ending. Only an asshole could find a problem with this one.

Loved the story, it could be renamed, The Price Of Pu$$y, but I know it’s not really the point of this tale. 5 stars well deserved!

Ignore the wankers. This story had real drama and it was a great change of pace. Good job!

To keep in the car just for this purpose, to cut right thru the seat belt, also ones to shatter the side window glass. Of course you have to be able to reach them. One more thought along those lines, a spring loaded center punch is easily concealed and works great for shattering the side windows if one was looking for quick, hard to observe at the time of action revenge. How do I know this...? I can't count the number of times my dear wife has come home totaling up receipts so she can explain to me how much money she saved us. My response hasn't worked any better in real life than in this story. I can never quite fathom how people can comment about how an author's characters 'would' act, the only one who can know is the author. People do realize Slirs stories are fiction, right? I have to admit at times after rereading his biography sometimes I wonder though. Signed: BTW

5* Enjoyed it! Write on!

put her on a budget and make her get a fucking job

...really enjoyed this. Well written. 5 stars, thanx!

Loklie

Your hitting kind of close to home on this one. Loved it

A great story, one of a great author's very best.

Had me invested from beginning to end, Ty!

HE gets well and his first stop should have been the divorce lawyers office. No one is stupid enough to stay with that bitch!

A pretty darn good story. The ending emotion and intensity didn't match that of the story, but it was at least funny.

I liked it a lot, in fact I gave it 5 stars. Would have been more, but, well, you know. Just two nitpicking points if I may. First, what grown man in 21st century America wears sandals with a jacket? I mean, the hippies back in the '60's, or the French, even now, but here?! Now?! And second is a lesson I learned when I was about 10.

Long before there was an "NCIS" tv show or a "Gibbs' rule #9". That is, never ever go anywhere without a knife. Yeah I know, knives are verboten in airports and court houses these days. But that's cool too, 'cause I don't go in airports or courthouses.

Thanks for the story, it was great.

I just knew it! he's cut from the same cloth as that bitch and thinks along the same lines. He really needs to be put in a fucking home for the asshole comments and for being one. Fuck you in the heart annony!

The car insurance should pay. If Obamacare was active, it would pay the hospital bills. Unfortunately Trump-care wont pay these bill! Mouse9 is really full of himself. He says he wrote his DanelSteel essay in 30 minutes, bullshit. More likely he took more than half a day going over all of his spelling and grammatical errors.

This story is really accurate for the average American female between the ages 18 to 39.

Wonderfully written.

I had an accident where I rolled my car and wound up suspended up side down by my seat belt with the car on its roof. Maybe that's why this hit suck a chord with me. I loved this story!

My first wife was frugal. Damn, I miss her. But my second wife was like Holly. My second wife would buy a pair of shoes, boots, or purse. She would wear them just long enough to show them off. Then she would say they didn't fit, or were the wrong color, or someone else had the same identical thing. And, off she'd go to find something else. A jury would understand if I strangled her, right?

Sometimes it takes a tragedy or near-tragedy for us to realize what's REALLY important!

It's always refreshing when someone posts a story in Loving Wives where no one cheats, and they obviously love each other. EVERY married couple argue over spending, no matter how much money they have! I think it's a rule, or something.

I seriously doubt that his iPhone lasted that long, when most people I know that own one, complain about having to recharge it daily, or in some cases, hourly. But that doesn't really matter in a story like this, does it? Nice to see a cop that is actually HELPFUL, instead of dismissive, even if he only exists in fiction! Good story.

to run around Holly Holy TK U MLJ LV NV

well written. Five stars.

When he got healthy and back to work he should have divorced her and sent her back to Daddy. What a bitch. And he wasn't much better. No likeable characters in this one.

A good story...thank you...

could do 100 miles on an eighth of a tank of petrol? I want one!!

This was another example of your poor English writing skills ie shined his torch ...wtf

it should be ... shone his torch. I don't understand how you can continue to make so many basic spelling, grammar & punctuation mistakes after all this writing, doesn't your computer have a spell check on it, that would help.

The story itself was ok, again you had a good plot, but spoilt it by poor characterisations & in places poor dialogue. Also I don't know that it was realistic for Steve's ipod battery to last so long, I mean he was gone for about 60 hours & it would have to have been fully charged prior to him leaving, still perhaps so. So Steve, not anywhere near your best. 2 **

shopping almost kills the male species, TK U MLJ LV NV

Loving wife... what more can you ask for 5 stars... no cheating, no adultery no wimps nothing. just plain loving marriage, with a few real life problems, nothing to do with sex or intruding friends or associations like other stories. Great job maybe chapter 2 or another similar story. 5 stars

why not the adult romance section? good story, well developed

Doesn't matter what category it is in. It is still an excellent effort by superb author.

"The biggest beef I have is that the story is in the wrong category. It should be in Romantic"

Yeah, cause we wouldn't want an actual Loving Wife in this catagory.

A neat, well-written and enjoyable story. Okay, the 'shopaholic' female was just a little bit of a stereotype, but at least she was a real 'loving wife.'

In the town where I live there is a main shopping street (it's too small for a mall) and, on any Saturday afternoon you'll see small groups of men gathered outside the shoes and clothes shops - they're smoking, chatting, waiting to get to the pub to watch the football - and they're all waiting for their wives to come out with whatever (if anything) they've bought. There are times when it's almost like being in a club!

Or anything but Loving Wives.

for breaking each promise. TK U MLJ LV NV

When are you going to be submitting again?

Ever notice how the good writers liked this but that the "anonymous" folks always complain. I guess because they can't actually "do".

I am sorry I wasted my time reading this.

Thanks your story was great it had me worried that you would not make it

i know it was just a story but what a great read,

Thanks again

I married a shopaholic 32 years ago...misery inc. But I still love her.

One slight addition I would make to the story would be to make the car that hit him a Mustang. Thanks!

I have a friend who, together with his teen daughter nearly died in an accident much the same like this. Fuck loosing ones license. People stopped by police with BAC over 0,2% should automatically be prosecuted for attempted manslaughter.

BTW: Its a little disturbing though that in the US of A, land of the law suits, a car company whose airbags fail to activate not only dont pay big time for that, but that the car insurance company can even get away with pulling crap afterwards.

I'm not sure exactly why some readers think that all stories have to have sex on this site, if that were true then the story screener would block it.

I would suggest that a warning at the top - but I've found on stories that do this, the anons still post comments.

I liked the tension and how the crisis let them both see how they were acting.

Regards,

ttom

TERRIFIC

I want to sincerely thank everyone who gave their feedback. I put stories to paper to get them out of my head so I can sleep at night. With five finished in the can and four more in various stages of completion, I'm just waiting on my editor to release the next one, Amnesty. My bride doesn't let one get posted until SHE is satisfied with it. Everyone has their own opinion on what should be posted and where, and if I can bring out those emotions in my readers I've done what I set out to do, pulled them into my stories. No one is going to like every story they read on this site but it give writers like me an outlet to refine their craft and grow with the feed back given. So thanks to all that took the time to put to paper what they truly thought of my work.

Slirpuff

Enjoyed this despite lack of sex. Also chuckled at DQS, who expressed regret that SP has not been keeping the fans supplied with stories. Never mind leaving the readers hanging with WWWM -- oh, I forgot, we can go buy an ebook to learn what happened to Bill Maitland. Anyway, this story was poignant and reminds me a bit of the airplane crash story -- was it "Homeward Bound," by Temuchen? That one also involved an argument and hubby gone missing. Thanks for writing.

love readers digest? they have kiddie porn in that now? stay away from middle schools you nonce.

DQS is wise enough to realize that in the heat of the moment people,especially young inexperienced people,can say stupid things.Holly isn't sincerely questioning her marriage,she was angry and lashed out....Steve is just as immature because he runs out not even thinking about what he is doing.It is like the kid who runs away from home claiming the family doesn't understand them,etc after being punished or whatever,it is childish but serious?If every time a couple.had someone say something they don't mean taken seriously few couples would exist.DQS knows this as does anyone ever in a semi long term relationship.

Mouse9,in most states the hospital bills by law are covered by insurance,it is generally no fault paid for by the injured's company.

Thanks for writing.

P.S. I bought the boots for Holly and the first night he was in the ditch, I was in HER'S!

Another great story. Thanks!

Very heart-rending. I've read a lot of your other stories and some I liked and some I disliked but this is for sure one of the best stories that you have. It's very real, and although non-erotic, it is about relationships. The only thing that I was surprised about was that the iPhone still had a charge, hahah

And I Love Readers Digest!

A real action/adventure story featuring a truly loving wife, and indomitable spirit to live. Kind of puts whats important and whats not, into perspective.

It was an enjoyable story but if he had an iPhone she could have checked his location herself without contacting Verizon, more accurately as well.

Well written and very believable with all of the detailed information that the author has given.

I was surprised that he didn't try and find the driver that ran him off of the road and make him pay restitution.

A great story

Thanks for the read.

Here are stories with sex scen without sex scen we readers like both. For me it does not matter there is not sex scen in the story or there is not (The story compiles with my taste). The LW hub is a mix hub in such view.

The best Romantic Revenge Story here Vulcez's story the "How are you" is without sex scen. In Literotica has many hubs, where you can find pure sex scen or good erotic. However a hub is formatted by the Authors and readers together and this mixed consistent is for pleasing majority of this hub's readers.

The SOL (storiesonline.net) is better, because the SOL have all spectrum of the stories from the sexual cannibalism to the not erotic as well and nobody complains.

After reading the other responses to this story, I felt I needed to add another 2 cents other than my comments equating this story to a bowl of oatmeal.

It was very well written for a short story.

It was a departure from your previous formats....and that's okay.

There was absolutely nothing erotic about this story. This is Literotica.com after all.

Yes it was a "Loving wife" story but more suited to Readers Digest short stories section.

I do tend to find the "Willing cuckold" formatted story to be something I don't like but to each his own. Am more into the "Angry husband.....Adultery is wrong" type of story. That's what you've delivered up till now.

Keep writing though as I have enjoyed nearly everything you've turned out.

...and as realistic as it gets. 'Edge of seat' stuff there for a while - I half thought that 'sorry' would come from the ether he left behind!

You nailed something fundamental with this one - your descriptive narrative and presentation of emotions is just about flawless.

I'm glad you're back - thank you for the enjoyment of a '5' story.

I'm just grateful you haven't left us worthless lot with all our bitchin'!

I appreciate the hell out of you.

I think it's one of the best that's been posted on this site for ages.

The below comments though? Like, wow. Lot's of messed up people out there... from those demanding a wife should be as Stepfordian as possible, with no room whatsoever to display any individual wants, to losers demanding that authors only post stories with hard core sex in them.

If you're just finished reading the story, do yourself a favour and skip reading the comments below. They're just stupid.

This brings up the issue of Loving Wives vs Non-Erotic catogories. This is a non-erotic story, but we all know no one reads those stories. Who can blame you for your choice of categories? Certainly not me.

Steve's descriptions of his predicament are outstandingly real. It became unbearable to the point where I almost stopped reading...but of course, I couldn't. I've enjoyed most of your stories and this one is one of your best. Thanks for posting.

DQS ...if EVERYONE is entilted to his / her opionion then why are these anonymous assholes jumping on him for exppressing his?

Mousse9 I think your insight is OK but not deep enough. The key is NOT about the wife buying too much stuff.

Its not about her by unneeded crap.

its how she reacts when she cant get her way. I am NOT suprised that DQS...given his last story...doesnt see this. Yes alot of young folks are too material driven and are a bit spoiled.

But DQS's question : "what did the wife do that was so bad?" ... misses a bigger issue.

why would she say that she regret getting married to him because she cant buy the boots ?

This had to be great, look at all the diverse comments! Most of the idiots checked in with their opinions, and yet I did not see an author that I recognized except StangStar who is clearly not an idiot. Predominately anon, which unfortunately is how i post because when I posted under my name and email address I was deluged by idiot anon's.

I always like your stories, perfectly polished or otherwise. You tell stories, mostly with a beginning, a middle, and an end (take note jpb). Mostly with a moral to the story, which I like. Please keep writing, more often if possible, its good to make the idiots think even in their cretin like way.

PS whatever happened to going after the airbag malfunction, andn the drunk driver who left evidence? Probably not important to the flow of the "I'm sorry" theme, but inquiring minds want to know.

"Not worth responding to" then responding makes you look like an idiot. As far as anonymous goes, unless your real name is Moose9 and this sad forum is your real world then everyone here is anonymous. Stop posting, it is making the anons look smart. Okay story but very non-erotic.

his wife doesn't blow the deliveryman and fuck the stockboy while shopping for shoes. Once a cuck, always a cuck.

your wife and mine must go to the same shoe store. My wife has 50 + pairs of shoes but never has anything to wear. Great Fuck RLW story. 25 stars

First things first. I loved this story. A lot of people loved it. It was a great story, and the fact that it could have run on almost any general fiction web site or magazine doesn't change that fact. I know the title is LitEROTICA and I know that a lot of readers, judging from comments, want a story they can jerk off to and have a climax. There's nothing wrong with that. There are plenty of stories on here to meet that demand. Writing a really hot, erotic story is an art form in itself. But as others have noted, some of the best and highest rated stories on this site have little or no erotic or sexual content. They can be funny, scary, touching, sad, but they don't have to give you an erection. Doesn't matter whether anybody agrees with that or not. It's a fact. Check out the ratings. The people who run this site obviously don't mind non-erotic stories or there wouldnt' be so many of them

Second, everybody's entitled to their opinion but I sometimes think a lot of male readers go around looking for a reason to think a woman is a bitch. What did the wife do that was so unforgiveable? She's young and spoiled and likes to spend money. I don't know what planet most of these readers live on, but I have to break it you - she's not that unusual. And it's not a crime to be young and spoiled and to like spending money. She didn't screw around on her husband, she didn't bring home another man's cum for him to dine on, she didn't have another man's baby or pawn his high school trophies to buy her shoes. She spent money rashly and got pissed off at her husband. And then she spends days worrying about where he is and finally takes the actions that save his life when she is the ONLY person that could have gotten law enforcement involved. What a bitch!

Finally, and this is to Slirpuff, your input has dwindled to almost nothing in recent months/years. What are you thinking? You have an obligation to us, your faithful readers, that far outweighs your obligations to family, friends, yourself... Shake it off, man, and become the writing machine that we all knew and loved at one time.

What makes it worse is that at the same time you slacked off, we've gotten almost nothing from mainstays like HDK and Ohio and...you name it. I guess they think they've got lives too. Only Starstang has stayed faithful and think he must be a trust fund baby who only sleeps three hours a night.

All sarcasm aside, you were one of the bright lights of this website. I've already told you that when you started you were prolific ...and rough. I always liked your work but it deepened and became more human, more real and dealing more with people's emotions than how cheating wives could be caught or slip up and get themselves caught. You also wrote about a wider variety of topics and plots than any other writer I can think of on this site. Over the last few years you have not only been as prolific as any, but also wrote some of the best stories published on this site. And then you went away.

Which is why I was so glad to see this story run. In terms of drama and suspense and emotion, it can stand up to anything published around here. And I hope it means you've come into money or are burning with creative urges right now and we'll be seeing more.

Don't mind the illegal aliens on the board (IE, anons). Too wimpy and weak in every sense of the word to even register here. Attacking someone by making "funny" insults about their online name? How incredibly juvenile and unimaginative. How old are you anyway, 12? This is an adult message board. Does your mom know you're posting here? Oh yeah, stop trolling.

Well, that problem is solved by going anonymous. I wonder how they'll make "funny" insults when it's only anons posting and can't tell one from another. You won't "see" me again, heh.

I guess it's all too true about GIFT when it comes to anon posters on Lit: Normal Person + Anonymity + Audience = Total Fuckwad

Look it up on Google, if any of you actually have enough brains to use it.

Man, I should've done this ages ago, using their own dirty tactics against them. Well, that's enough time and energy wasted on idiots for now. Sorry Slirpuff, but these moronic anons needed putting down.

as she hurries past any shoe shops? I think this conveys a lesson learnt. A very gritty and realistic telling. Good to see this author still in fine form. But can somebody please explain these idiots going on about 'willing cuckolds'? It's tiresome and immature. Why reduce a good story to the level of schoolyard bickering? Shame on those commenters.

Now if you could work us into your schedule on a regular basis......

From the beginning of the story, it was obvious that he had wrecked his car, and then it became clear that fight was about spending money on the pair of boots when it should have been reserved for car insurance. OK was he guilty of stupidity,too?

Yes man! I wonder who was sorry? Both of them... Well worked and detailed story that pushed him into an extreme sports condition. Really nicely done.

He is just being overly cynical and grumpy. Getting annoyed because a character in a story did not learn her lesson. Shut-ins experience real life on this board; prostrating themselves, rebuking and chastising story characters, and telling authors what should happen in their stories. Pathetic.

Whenever I see your name on a story, I know I'm in for a great read. This one was no different. You described the events so well that I thought I was trapped there in that car with him. Great job.

Anon had a good point. This is a cuckold category now, the willing ones and the ones in the closet fight it out while the quality of the stories in the category tanks. Submit in non-erotic and reach an audience beyond the "two sides of the same coin" anon alluded to.

I'm not sure I entirely get the point though, unless you just simply wanted to convey an episode in the life of an ordinary, well-suited couple and their reactions to a near tragic crisis. And why not, I guess I've just answered my own doubts..

Thanks for writing. 4*

Wife gets caught in a car wreck, husband gets caught in a mine cave in, daughter gets caught in car wreck, husband gets caught in car wreck. We can all think of several times where this has happened. If it weren't for car wrecks, other disasters, and the occasional disease and death bed scene, this genre would die.

This was such a fine story that I simply do not have the superlatives to adequately express my true feelings about it. I have been a fan for a long time, but as Britease has said, you have taken it to a whole new level. Thank you for all that you do.

a couple had a fight, nearly lose each other due to an auto accident, and are stronger now because of it

it's a whole lot more believable than "a couple has a fight, wife fucked anything with a pulse, they nearly lose each other, and are stronger now because of it."

I'd rather be the first guy any day.

physical pain is a lot easier than heart break.

Everybody says the cuck lovers hate this story. Probably true. But the cheating revenge assholes ALSO hate it. Why? Because the wife not only did not cuckold the husband but there was also no need for revenge. In other words, no fun for either side and both sides are just opposite sides of the same coin. Bottom line? They hate happiness and happy endings because they're such losers.

As to the complaints that it doesn't belong in literotica, please note that there's an entire category for non-erotic. Furthermore, litterally hundreds of Loving Wives stories begin with the author warning the reader that "there's no sex in this story". That caveat precedes some of the highest rated stories in LW.

Great job, Slirpuff. I'm glad that the trolls haven't led you to abandon LW like so many of the best writers have. Sadly, some of the biggest commenters seem to think that writers have to put up with their bullshit. Sorry, but they don't. They just leave. Then, all we're left with are the semi-literate ravings of the few that are left.

This is a well written entertaining story that does fits into the "Loving Wife" category. This wife is a far more 'loving wife' in the true sense of the word than any wife that appears in a willing cuckold story on this site. It appears the willing cuck readers hated this story because there was no cuckolding, as others have said they should read other stories that are about willing cuckolds, this story is not. Well done Slirpuff good to see you back writing again, I hope you will post more stories reall soon.

Thanks for sharing.

shouldn't you be writing several 'denial mode' comments on chapter 5 of a cuck story somewhere? my guess is you didn't read it but are trying to make a smokescreen; come out of the closet cuckboy, whimper and moan about how much you hate cuck stories as you read them voraciously.

Great story! This belongs in this category and is a good example of a loving wife tale. Love your stories, keep them coming.

Enjoyed it.Love your stuff

Maybe not 'erotic' in any way. It touches on difficulties in relationships. Maybe a parable preaching against "hit the road" reactions? Good thing wife didn't give up.

4.5 from me.

Suddenly, I'm craving oatmeal, buttered toast and cranberry juice.

Just brilliant!

Oatmeal is okay. Buttered toast is okay. Cranberry juice is okay.

A true "Loving Wives" tale. A great read.