All Comments on 'Sorry, Come Again Sir?'

by ellen_swallows

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good read

i liked the hair pulling and biting her neck, please continue

William smythWilliam smythalmost 12 years ago
Rusty?

Not at all!

This is a 5 star example of good, well written and extremely erotic pornography.

A clever title and a good story line. Congratulations but please don't let this be your one and only contribution

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Um what the hell?

" We can celebrate the birth of baby Jesus with hot squirts all over my bed."

That is the worst sentence I have ever read in erotic fiction.

I hated this whole story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very good!

One of the hottest I've read recently, and have bookmarked it for the future!

As for Anonymous #1, he hated the story but read through it entirely? How bizarre! Don't listen to him; his comment means nothing.

MissA5MissA5over 11 years ago
Damn.

Damn... that was strange and new and great all at once. I loved the way it was written... This line made me laugh out loud, because I think the same way!!! "I needed a fuck. Do you mind?" But anyway, that was very hot, and I loved it because your protagonist seems a lot like me, if more forward. Great job, and I'd love to see a second chapter. Thanks for the favorite on my story, by the way!

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