by ellen_swallows
Not at all!
This is a 5 star example of good, well written and extremely erotic pornography.
A clever title and a good story line. Congratulations but please don't let this be your one and only contribution
" We can celebrate the birth of baby Jesus with hot squirts all over my bed."
That is the worst sentence I have ever read in erotic fiction.
I hated this whole story
One of the hottest I've read recently, and have bookmarked it for the future!
As for Anonymous #1, he hated the story but read through it entirely? How bizarre! Don't listen to him; his comment means nothing.
Damn... that was strange and new and great all at once. I loved the way it was written... This line made me laugh out loud, because I think the same way!!! "I needed a fuck. Do you mind?" But anyway, that was very hot, and I loved it because your protagonist seems a lot like me, if more forward. Great job, and I'd love to see a second chapter. Thanks for the favorite on my story, by the way!