All Comments on 'Sort of Legal Ch. 13'

On the mobile app I can't read beyond "The comm chined again a simple text message it said."

Anyhow a long expected continuation, a little short for my taste. I long for the next part already

one continuity error the Brimorian's are the Fish bstds, the kintark are the lizard bstds! And story is great.....just too short!!

Got a little confused when the text turned Italics. Also a little confused at the last bit in the CO's office. Can you give a bit of explanation of What happened after Ginger walked out?

I'm enjoying the story and look forward to your next installment. Thank You.

DJ

Hi Guys, I am not sure what happened, there seems to be a large chunk missing of this chapter, I'll have a go at re submitting it.

Need to get to the next chapter, asap!.