All Comments on 'South American Sex Slut'

Early in the story there was a shortage of men in the village. Then all the ass play. That was kind of counter productive. Just an observation.

Nice story -- & it immediately suggests a followup or continuation! how about more from this family, this town or region full of horny women willing to do anything & everything?

Hi. Thank you for your comments. I find them interesting and valuable as I develop my skills as an erotic story writer. I'm very gratified that readers like my stories (at least the two that have made it pass the editors). I will strive to submit more and better work for your carnal proclivities (and mine too). :) Check out my edited resubmission of this story with your ideas / suggestions implemented. As for doing a sequel or continuation . . . well, it's a mood thing. It depends on how I'm feeling at the time (horny?). But if you keep reading this dirty girl will keep writing. Ciao!

Your use of many Spanish words & names detracted from the story. Much of the Spanish, is not spanish, but " EastLA Pachuco".

I think the storyline is a bit light. Seems like you are trying to apologize for something.

I wish my late wife and I could have been apart of your family, and your imagination.

Heather? Why do you use your real name? Has your mom seen this? -rs