All Comments on 'Southern Woman Blacked at Club'

The basic idea was a a good one but there was not enough emotional involvement, perhaps because the characters didn't say enough for the readers to understand how they were feeling. The editing was distractingly poor. Did the author actually read para. 5 after writing it?

a nice story, my peeve is when authors do big cock stories and write the first sex encounter they go to the he just jammed it in to the hilt and she came immediately and continuously. It's not realistic or elegant writing. I did enjoy the rest though.

Good. None of that going black horseshit. just good fucking