All Comments on 'Spa Room Antics'

Is there a prelude to this story?

This was really good! Only a few spelling and grammar errors. Seems as though there should be a prelude to this, and I would be interested lol

This was good but might want to comb over it for grammar. Subjunctive mood and shaping between active and passive voice and all that. Really decent though!

There is a prelude coming! Less so NSFW and more backstory. Thank you for the comments! I will get the grammar fixed up. I am still learning how to write, but this is an RP between my husband's character and mine. We decided to post it and see what others thought of the story.