All Comments on 'Space Traveler Ch. 01'

by LasVegasHuny

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wildernesswildernessalmost 16 years ago
Good tension

Great build up. I enjoyed it very much. Hope there's more on the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
How wonderful!

When will the next chapter be posted?

Lady_BlackhawkLady_Blackhawkalmost 16 years ago
More, please!

I love this story. The tension between the two characters is so breath-taking! I can not wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Whoa

This story really fired up my imagination. When will the second chapter be posted? Please be kind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
YOU HAVE TO FINISH!

THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY I HAVE READ IT SO MANY TIMES PLEASE UPDATE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
please

i know its been years but this is such an interesting storyu will u ever finish it???

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ripp seems too human-like

Ripp seems very human-like for an android. You could have explained why an android would need to work out. Also, why would he be programmed to become aroused from seeing his mistress naked (especially when she didn't desire him to, and without him being able to just turn off that functionality)? I would think simple voice commands to initiate or cease arousal and sex would suffice. Masturbating on his own would also waste his "cum" reserves.

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