All Comments on 'Spank Me, Please!'

... for new authors and début stories, and this is one of them. Thank you, welcome to Literotica, SoumiseM, and please bring us more -- and have five stars while you're about it!

I couldn't even finish reading because of the "..." Learn how to use punctuation

I luuuuuuuv me some ellipses. 💖 They make my panties all wet!

Seriously, in the context of a simple story meant for fun, not earth changing revelations, the use of many ellipses is not a large problem. Dialogue especially lends itself to such use as people often have frequent pauses and fractured grammar in their speech.

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