All Comments on 'Special Night'

by Yanglee30

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Take a Literacy Course

This story would have to improve to be horrible. Your planning of the story is so ragged and repetitive and your use of words is just so jumbled it's pathetic. Take a literacy course and try again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Needs improvement

Very repetitive. I liked the idea but the way it was told i got bored and lost concentration.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LOVE IT - I CUMMED 3X

LOVE this...... Thank you so much this was hot....pls write a prt 2 about the husbands friend blackmailing her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
wonderful story

hot hot hot, and well written. no wasted story line but had a great build-up. a great fantasy of mine and very erotic

HeatseekingmoisturemissleHeatseekingmoisturemisslealmost 6 years ago
Good story

We’re not handing out awards for grammar and literature here. This is a hot story. I enjoyed it. Give us some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mmmmm

Mmmm.... please keep writing these stories. Very sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Gorgeous picture, if I lived near you I’d be after you also.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Whoever helped you edit this needs work. Impossible to continue sucking his cock is you start on your knees then stand straight up, unless he’s four feet long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

With all you left undone why wouldn't you finish this?

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