All Comments on 'Speed-dating with Emily'

A bit short and fast ending for romance. As Erotic couplings it is a five! Not as a romance.

Nice story, enjoyed it's flow and the options in which it could be continued. Very good on it's own as well. I'll be looking for other stories from you. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Wow! Love the stockings and garter belt.

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Great start to erotic writing!

11/10!!!!!

This being your first story, I sure hope you will add many, many more as well written as this one. 5 stars.

Please keep up the good work.

Any comments by others should only be appreciative of your style. Any grumblings should be ignored.

I hope there is more to this story

A real speed date!

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Good story, very speedy, which I guess is the point, but I’m just greedy and like Oliver Twist would like more, however, this story whilst being small, is perfectly formed. 5⭐️ Please keep writing, cheers Ppfzz.

hope theres more to this one??

Grumblings, should they be constructive, should not be ignored as they will help you be a better writer in the future.

My grumbling is about the inconsistent use of the tenses. You jumped from past tense to present tense and back numerous times. A good beta reader/proofreader should help sort this out for you.

So much potential, but a little rushed .. which is a shame as the stories could have been so much more sensual especially as it was a Valentines Day story. Please add another chapter.

KR

EG