by Christie052780
I'm still panting. I especially liked the recliner scene (it was very sensual. I love caresses and stroking). I'm not sure about permanent collar though but hey, I still loved this story.
Your stories are nice as usual, but I miss the part where the cock is rammed so deep inside the woman that it couses her discomfort and/or pain. These last submissions of yours are, in my opinion, a little bit to much vanilla. But I guess there are people getting off on that too.
Okay, not where I thought it was going, but I liked it. When do we get chapter 4?
cant wait for this girl to finally get knocked up and have a hungry infant on her tits.
It was more subtle before and the shift to the known territory of master and sub. is a step down from the more original power-play we have seen between the two in the previous chapters.
Your summary does not lend itself to a naturalness. When a bare cock is used and cum is shot into a womb, one visualizes that a baby is made?
It's sad that you don't seem to write anymore - you are SO talented. I really am a big fan. ( not the stalker type, just the avid reader. )
I am not fond of the end of chapter three as I was in one and two. Although this series was a lot more softer then the usual for you, but nonetheless I loved the series. I thought she would end up going back home pregnant or with a baby since her parents were probably going nuts. There should be a fourth chapter where he takes her anally and she takes him orally. but she SHOULD go home. Thanks for you wonderful work.
i disagree with the last commentor i love that he kept her there but i do agree she should have ended up prego heres to hoping you write a ch 4 thanks again for the great story hope there is a ch 4
I also thought she would be pregnant. Would love to see you continue with the story. I would like for her to visit her family, but with him. As she chooses to stay and raise a family together.
Yes I did Like it you have a real gift !!!! And I agree with others you should continue with it I also like the idea of the visit to family. Maybe bringing in other family members ... No mention of siblings, but she did have friends. Did she not? Maybe she could be coerced into subjecting them into his life of their servitude. She could maybe get jealous and join in their torment, till there will is broken there are many possibilities BUT you are the artist here and it is up to no one but you if this is a finished work of art or not... Thank you so much for sharing.... shawnholman54@yahoo.com if you would like to contact me for proof reading or more thoughts on this or other stories I don't have your gift but I have many a thought W.E.G.
I hope Lori gets pregnant and marries Mike. They both seem to satisfy each others deepest needs
I hope Lori carries Mike's baby in her belly soon. I really believe they were made for each other. Mike will make a good loving provider and Lori will make a good loving wife and mother of Mike's children.
I stumbled on to your profile a month ago, and I've been reading your stories. You are an amazing writer! I really love non-consent and impregnation stories, I've read a lot of it, but this story is really my favourite!! I just hope that you will continue this story again. Lots of love - isabella.
Its time for mike to put his cum into her belly so that it can begin to swell soon with his baby growing inside it3
Are you serious??? Do they reconcile?? Does she ever get to go home?? Does she get the surgery to fix her legs??? And she's surely pregnant now!!
I need to know!! I need closure!!! Aarrgghhh!!!
P.S. Great story. But I'm not a fan of the ending.
Seems someone forot to fins a story line! Need Closure!!! :-(