All Comments on 'Speed Run'

I tried even reading it again thinking that maybe I missed something but I just don’t see anything worth commenting on except the lack of something to comment on. I know you can do better than this. You need a real plot and maybe some attempt at characters with a history or backstory of some sort. You have a lot of previous stories with content but everyone puts out a dud once in awhile.

Hey, I dont know what that other anon is talking about, but this story was fantastic. The unaware angle was done in a way I had never seen before and it was played amazingly well. Hell, the only part of the story I didnt love was Charlie rejecting a relationship. But even then, it felt completely in character. Great job writing a magnificent story, friend! :)

I saw someones negative comment and chuckled. I thought it was both funny and decently hot, and the entire premise was brilliant.