by sophia jane
Sophia Jane, this story is terrific! I'm glad to find a woman who knows what turns a guy on. This is your best story yet. Each one gets better! Thanx.
Very, very hot piece of work.
Such a good job of building the central character's building emotions.
Well done.
mmmm .. great job SJ ... your descriptions are SOO real .. loved it ... will there be a part 3 ??
Lovely build-up.
Nice to see the girl take the lead and the guys looking to please her. Well done.
Very sexy read, I could almost smell it!
Well done, nice writing.
I don't know how it is possible, but it is. You have painted such a sexy, realistic picture. It makes me wish I was a cop, hehehe. Thanks!
SJ your stories are so good. Part 2 was even better than the first. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
I love hot cop stories, you wrote that so well. Just came off like my favourite erotica authors
I simply loved your story (both part 1 and 2)! I loved how you kept the protogonist's dignity but still made it hot! Its fun to see a good threesome without all the "sluts, whore, cunt..." insults riding the storyline; I'm glad I read your story :)
A lot of stories have a redundence in them but you kept it fresh and fun! The characters were also realist and were easy to relate too!
Thx for the sexy read!
excellent. I wasn't anticipating the second cop to be there, really made the story! Keep up the great work