All Comments on 'Spell Gone Wrong'

A spell, God you need to get a life. This is so ridiculous it lowers the intelligence of those reading it. Kind of questions you're intelligence.

A amazing little story

Nice hope there's more

"you're intelligence"? Now we're questioning your intelligence, ya dork! The whole story is the spell! This story DOES need some work for it to be much more than fluff. Why not get into everyone's personalities a bit. We know nothing about the mom and she probably will never know what happened to Sunday. Why does girlfriend even want to be in mom's body? Oh, yeah, it was a mistake. Weird little squirrelly-ass story

A unique way of writing. 5 Stars. The main point being Isabella wanted Oliver to fuck his mom, and he did. I think taboo desires were awakened in Oliver's real mom too. Now he can fuck Isabella on date nights, and his mom the rest of the time. Sometimes though, it may be Isabella in his mom's body that he's fucking. Regardless, Oliver is going to be getting a lot of pussy.

Ignore the negative comments, it's a great little story just for exploring lust, not everything needs to be a deep dive into characters and their motivations. Liked the concept and it was hot!

It's great please continue.

I think it would have made better sense if the mom was looking for love and created the spell but then ended up in the gf body and had sex with her son.