All Comments on 'Spellman Ch. 21'

Introducing sexy competitor number.. 3? Or is it 4?

I think it is 5 or 6 depending on Tori.

Cece

Riley

Melissa

Beth

Emma

Tori (maybe)

Well it is 5 or 6 depending on Tori I think.

Cece

Riley

Melissa

Beth

Emma

Tori (Maybe)

Tricksy storyteller! But, I'm following wherever, and how improbably, you lead. Damn, hooked!

These were his sexual partners so far:

Riley

Tori

Melissa

Tessa

Serenity

Tiffany

He turned down Emma and Cece won't be ready for that for a while. Beth shouldn't be in the equation, either, as it's clear she's at least bi, but stated their "ship" already sailed.

You've thrown a real wrench in the works, as there's no way Beth should have gotten into his bed--AND Tori's coming over the boot! If he doesn't get Beth out in a hurry, Tori will likely have a BIG catfight with Beth!

A therapist would be telling both Melissa and Ryan to spend time ALONE and to AVOID any romantic entanglements UNTIL they have their issues worked out: they would have to identify the problems, write down possible solutions, then try to strike each one off the list and ONLY engage in a relationship once they addressed them all. First thing they would tell you is that "another person cannot fix you, nor is that their job--it is YOURS!" The only way to have a healthy relationship is to start with a healthy approach and make sure you communicate and understand each other well FIRST...if not, if the relationship is only based on sex, you'll never weather any serious problem and as a couple, fold like a house of cards with the first breeze.

Far more plausible setup recently, and the story's on far more reasonable footing--and I'm now looking forward to it. 5

Enjoyed reading it..

Hate to sound like a woman chasing her orgasm, but seriously, "Don't stop ... just like that ... yeah, keep going ..."

I love the direction you are taking us. One night stand stories have there place but not in a novel

Yes!!! This is more like it. Thank you for going back to single POV!!!

Predictable yet another twist. I hope that means there will many more episodes

Good turn. Keep going.

Give us more episodes

The wait for next chapter is killing me. Such an amazing story so far. Also hoping we hear more from the nurse who lives in the apartment complex with Tori and Melissa.

Any update on the next story? This Beth cliffhanger is killing me

The wait is killing me. Don’t let us hang like so many authors who say they are writing part 1 and just quit.

Made an update on my profile yesterday. Next chapter has already been submitted, it just takes Lit a while to post it

@KHelm

You're writing quality stuff, so I would think your readers will be willing to wait a little longer. Your output is far better than the avg writer here, that might take months (like one I just read a submission from) before getting another chapter out.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm team CeCe, or at least not Beth, or Tessa, or Serenity or Tiffany anyway.

"You're killing me Smalls!"

"Beth??!!"

What did he expect...he DID say for her to help herself to ANYTHING during the night...so she crawled into bed with her best friend. As he says, it is nice to wake up to a warm body in bed next to you!!

I am really appreciating the timing/pace of this series...flows just right, with the characters interacting in just the right ways...a little drama, but Ryan is dealing with all that the way and ADULT should!! And the girls appear to appreciate it...even if they think they want/need more from him

Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋💓💓💓💓💓👍💯