All Comments on 'Spin Ch. 03'

All the smoldering finally led to a fire. This is hot, undoubtedly, but it’s so so sensual. Gorgeous writing. Gus deserves a turn on top, yeah?

So hot. I’d like to see next chapter that they flip it around, with Gus fucking Jackie’s ass. No labels, no strict roles, just hot, private, personal, intimate stuff between two dudes.

Dear lord. I will never read anything but quickie stories again if these two do not stay together. Been bitten on the last one. Writing draws you in. Thanks

Well, dnsontn beat me to it again, his words are my sentiments exactly. When I saw this was chapter #3, I realized I had missed chapter #2 somehow. I then decided to read the entire story from the start, I'm really glad I did. This has been such a great story to read. The slow and steady build has added so much impact. The descriptions of your characters and their feelings has been excellent. I too am also hoping that Gus gets to top as their relationship develops. Looking forward to chapter #4. Thanks, MLF

Fucking amazing. I've been following you for a while now and was very happy to see that chapter 3 showed up. You are a gifted writer and I hope Rising Sap chapter 3 will arrive soon. And hopefully Spin chapter 4...

I love these two! I hope you write more chapters. You write beautifully.

Such a great story. Thanks for writing this

I really hope you come back to this. Just saw you posted a new story. Hopefully we get a new chapter on this one.

Great story and series!

Great scene

They are extremly cute and I love the way they are able to laugh together during intimacy

Excellent. Yummy!