by Alex De Kok
I like your "little tale" so far....but I'd like to see more. For that reason I gave you a '50' out of a possible '100'. Perhaps a little more may give a higher score....And you might consider mentioning a lack of birth control, or forgetting that she is ovulating....
Alex,
Not sure how I missed the gems in this series. Read all three right now, and loved them all. Would love at least one more to hear how he got on with Julie.
Ted
I was on the verge of writing that I was suffering from withdrawal pains from not having seen anything recently. Hope you'll continue
Nice series Alex, has helped me to narrow down your entry though!
use the situation to continue the story in a completely different venue. This was a good continuation and packed some good sailing around some good sex with several people and one future one. I read these two pages over three days and lost some continuity, so it probably wasn't as erotic as it would have been if I had read it all at one sitting. But it was the kind that makes the reader look for more, another continuation, and I just looked to see if there was one. Yes! But it took two years to 2006. And, I am reading from earlier to later. I think I'll cheat here and find out how Julie (others? how about that nudist camp guide?) will respond. And, I particularly like sailing stories - how I miss my younger sailing days. Thanks for the memories.