All Comments on 'Sponge Bath? Hell Yes!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it...

good build up and a great ending... keep it up!

mememe621mememe621over 13 years ago
Nice Quick Story

Welcome back! It's always nice to see an author I enjoy reading return. Can I put in a special request for another chapter in your "In the Closet" series?

Mature_nylonsMature_nylonsover 13 years ago
No realisum

'ripped body'?

Too unobtainable, I know it's fantasy but I like my fantasy to have a semblance of truth. It wasn't for me

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I noticed punctuation issues. Also, how does she see the "ripped body" when you're lying face-down?!

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