All Comments on 'Spontaneous Threesome'

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e4mooke4mookabout 12 years ago

Love your work,

had me hard all the way,

keep it up

sirhugssirhugsabout 12 years ago
What was there was good

but it was very brief & the "bi" set up was never really delivered on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

The build up wasn't very good, and the story was too brief. It needs to be longer, with more information on each of the characters. it jumped right into the sex scene, didn't like that very much.

sweetnessuksweetnessukabout 12 years agoAuthor
Hi

Okay, cheers, thanks. I will take note of that. This scenario did actually happen this fast in real life but will write something more extensive.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it!

I love your stories, but, in my opion, they need to be sexier. More cum and more juice.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 12 years ago
Very hot but very short

Love the "bi-ness." More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Stupid story. Too rushed.

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