by sweetnessuk
but it was very brief & the "bi" set up was never really delivered on.
The build up wasn't very good, and the story was too brief. It needs to be longer, with more information on each of the characters. it jumped right into the sex scene, didn't like that very much.
Okay, cheers, thanks. I will take note of that. This scenario did actually happen this fast in real life but will write something more extensive.
I love your stories, but, in my opion, they need to be sexier. More cum and more juice.