All Comments on 'Spreading Seeds Ch. 32'

by JackLuis

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magnum59magnum59over 7 years ago
Spreading Seeds: content and size

I would like to see longer chapters and definitely more story content. The sex is great but it is hard to rate a short snippet very high based on sex alone. When you started to weave a storyline around the house hidden in a bunker, I was interested but the story went nowhere but to a couple of sex scenes. I would like it better if you could combine multiple chapters.

I do want to thank you for writing stories such as this. I have tried a couple of times but have never gotten anything up to where I think it could be published.

Ken

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
my preference

Jack, you ask if we preferred the shorter or the longer chapters. My own request would be for the shorter. There's a certain amount of excitement in each session -- this is more than a sex novel -- and if the chapter is too long the excitement drops off a bit. BUT, keep 'em coming! I love the series.

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