All Comments on 'Spring Break Pt. 02'

wtf ?you finger bang mom she starts to give you a foot job then you wake up to a blow job.now out of nowhere you are in a 3way with a manly looking female neighbor then take it in the ass?pick a storyline stick with it then go on to the next.when did he and mom ever fuck and when did it become the smart thing to tell everybody you know you are fucking your own kid?

I think the word you are looking for is comment, NOT commit.

Story sucked anyway.........................

I took one glance at this shit, and decided "If this bozo cares that little about it's own fucking story, it won't care I gave it a 1."

"...who's husband has pasted..."

I believe you meant "whose" and "passed". And that's just for starters.

Please, please stop "writing". Or at least stop submitting.

Even after 9 years one of the worst written stories on here.Tells you a lot about the sad state of our educational system.