All Comments on 'Spring Break Slut'

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basilsheppardbasilsheppardabout 18 years ago
Good first

I really enjoyed the story. It was hot but also good writing w background. Hope to hear more from you.

MrKnowitallMrKnowitallabout 18 years ago
Out-fucking-standing

Hot coeds going wild and eager to please! That's my favorite subject matter. The story was well-written and very hot. I just hope she gets some release soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very strong effort

Conceptually I loved it. The girl with a naughty secret, and a master who was controlling her from long distance... yummy.

Still, I would have liked to have seen the story fleshed out a little more. It felt somewhat rushed.

Overally I enjoyed it and I hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
what a slut...

I heard 'such orgasm training is mundane'...But there are few who do something right every once in awhile and acheive it...LOL.

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