All Comments on 'Spring Break Vacation Ch. 02'

Crisply well constructed. Good set up, character and plot development. Hot. Really well written. More please.

Both of your stories about Carla have been outstanding. It's kind of sad, but I have written so many stories myself, that one has to be smoking hot for me to get a hard-on. This one did it. Thanks very much for a great, interesting, well-developed story.

I think I like it so much, because when I was a junior in high school, I was head-over-heels in love with a young lady named Marcie. She was Mexican-American, about 5'8" and thin. Her breasts were probably "A" or "B", but her I felt like I could drown in her eyes, if that makes sense to you.

She was interested, but I never made a move, because her boyfriend was a friend of mine. If I knew then, what I know now, I would have done everything I could to take her away from him. At any rate, I LOVE this story and am looking forward to Episode 3.