All Comments on 'Spring Break Vacation Ch. 02'

Both of your stories about Carla have been outstanding. It's kind of sad, but I have written so many stories myself, that one has to be smoking hot for me to get a hard-on. This one did it. Thanks very much for a great, interesting, well-developed story.

I think I like it so much, because when I was a junior in high school, I was head-over-heels in love with a young lady named Marcie. She was Mexican-American, about 5'8" and thin. Her breasts were probably "A" or "B", but her I felt like I could drown in her eyes, if that makes sense to you.

She was interested, but I never made a move, because her boyfriend was a friend of mine. If I knew then, what I know now, I would have done everything I could to take her away from him. At any rate, I LOVE this story and am looking forward to Episode 3.

Crisply well constructed. Good set up, character and plot development. Hot. Really well written. More please.