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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OF COURSE

SURELY YOU NEEDN'T ASK. OF COURSE WE WANT TO READ MORE. IT IS A FANTASTIC LOVE STORY BETWEEN MOTHER AND SON. SO PLEASE, HURRY.

GOOD LUCK AND GOOD WRITING.

billdakidbilldakidabout 6 years ago
Please more

It is a great story. Many ways it can go. Look so forward to a continue.

jsmangisjsmangisabout 6 years ago
Yes, Absolutely!

I think that this story should continue, and that sister should join in on the fun as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More more more

Fuck that was hot I NEED more

boaman007boaman007about 6 years ago
I agree

I am going along with the concensus and saying YES to more. Great so far, can't wait for the next installment.

blaster666blaster666about 6 years ago
Absolutly!

That was hot. Thanks for letting Mom be all natural. It's refreshing to read a story were the woman isn't shaved. 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Definitely MORE !!!!!!

Hell yes we want more. Get to writing and get it posted. That’s was great

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Totally disgusting ! ;) I really liked it ! :) Good story. What will they do now ? Keep up the good work !

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
Yeah definitely more

Great story , alot different than the norm here, would like to see you flesh this story out over a few more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More Please!

Like to involve the sister also. One on one with mom and then a 3some.

jamesmaryjamesmaryabout 6 years ago
definitely more please !

I love the idea from another reader to bring in the sister at some point - many thanks - keep up the good work

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
ENCORE

another great story. loved the idea, well written. of course - more please!!!! and more sex as well!!! 5 stars yet again.

lespoon1lespoon1about 6 years ago
5+

Yes more. I think he should move her in to the house she loves so much. It seems he can afford to support her.

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
Yes please

More and more, fun with mom and sis too.

Kuntkilla69Kuntkilla69about 6 years ago
Yes

Yes, much more. Sis walks in on him hammering away at that pussy. Her juice running down her legs.

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 6 years ago
Definately more!

Absolutely! Write it your way, and soon please.

doogdoog1doogdoog1about 6 years ago
Great

Please continue. Its your story to take in which ever direction you want.

Thanks

boyers12boyers12about 6 years ago
more

yes more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More?

More, more, and more again! That was so hot! Gonna read the second chapter now and hope fore more to follow soon!

ekim22ekim22about 6 years ago
I LOVED IT

So well written. I loved all the voyeuristic "peeks" involved in the story. Well done, I hope you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Absolutely beautiful

Poetic and erotic. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
one of the best

Great read. Your very talented

sunburycdsunburycdabout 6 years agoAuthor
crossover

In answer to the emailer who forgot to leave their details; yes the red headed woman and boy with the skateboard are the characters from Glory Days.

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 6 years ago
More ?

Why Yes of Course !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please!

please continue this great story. And thanks for letting her keep her pubes. Next up, peeing together?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Beautiful

Please continue this story. Possibilities seem endless

cslt1cslt1almost 5 years ago
Love It!

Great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
ABSOLUTELY

Please continue with story. Maybe followed up with them living together till death !!!

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Good job.

Too short. Much more could be done with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

Great start to a great story, hope you do a follow up

Mojo648Mojo648almost 4 years ago
Review.

Definitely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes, more more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This one needed more. Tash finding out about the peephole and watching them before joining them

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story, very well written and told and looking forward to part two..........():\

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