by greytonesandredlights
Much better than the first which was still good. Look forward to more.
What an interesting twist , even though it was predictable , you still kept my interest . The descriptive writing skills you possess are remarkable , it showcases your imagination and defines you as a talented author ! Well done ! Hope to read more of your work in the future , that is if you find it in your heart to indulge us .
I hope doug punishes Janet for her deceit and lies. That can't go unpunished. Mom should not be left out of that either.
Great story. It really does need at least another part. Janet needs to be punished, and mom deserves a few more nights pleasuring her son and Janet!
I'll take spelling into consideration, do you happen to recall which ones were spelt wrong? I'll admit at times I flip between American and British spelling without noticing.
That was an unexpected turn into Eyes Wide Shut territory and it was terrific. Will read part three very soon. Well done.