by Boondocker42
This scenes was ruined for me you making Jared tasting that guy's on Stacey's fingers....; I am not into MM/ at least announce that at the beginning for those of us who are not in that kind of stuff.
Not much of a plot here and didn't get me horny sorry. Three stars for a good effort. Plot is everything, even in an erotic story, So many novice writers don't get it. There must be three acts: action in act 1 giving us the bones of the plot, conflict in act 2, and resolution in act 3.