by sgtklark
i know that she can not resist his big black cock from now on, but the joy she gets will be awesum
getting quite interesting. I've enjoyed reading the tale and am looking forward to more. A slight comment---I was just a bit put off by the juxtaposition of language, her old Southern way of speech and the narrator's use of explicit words such as cock, pussy, et al. The mix of vernacular is slightly jarring. (It would be interesting, I think, to have some of the descriptions of the copulation be told from her point of view and in her southern ladylike phraseology). This is a minor critique and does in no way diminish the enjoyment I felt while reading the story and the anticipation I feel hoping that there will be a part 3 and a part 4 and perhaps even a part 5 and six. Please do keep writing! A score of 5 for sure.
is she horny or what, any way she is hooked on beautiful black cock now, can not wait to see how much she can take