All Comments on 'Stacy's Riding Lesson Ch. 02'

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cheryl_4funcheryl_4funover 12 years ago
good one

i know that she can not resist his big black cock from now on, but the joy she gets will be awesum

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
Story is

getting quite interesting. I've enjoyed reading the tale and am looking forward to more. A slight comment---I was just a bit put off by the juxtaposition of language, her old Southern way of speech and the narrator's use of explicit words such as cock, pussy, et al. The mix of vernacular is slightly jarring. (It would be interesting, I think, to have some of the descriptions of the copulation be told from her point of view and in her southern ladylike phraseology). This is a minor critique and does in no way diminish the enjoyment I felt while reading the story and the anticipation I feel hoping that there will be a part 3 and a part 4 and perhaps even a part 5 and six. Please do keep writing! A score of 5 for sure.

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 12 years ago
wow

is she horny or what, any way she is hooked on beautiful black cock now, can not wait to see how much she can take

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Getting funnier

Lots funnier than the first chapter.

DarkTemptation434DarkTemptation434over 12 years ago

Great Story keep up the work.

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