All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 04'

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kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Loving it as usual... Wish my man would marry me and take me on a honey moon like that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
wow vanalas

thanx alot for that sweet honeymoon wow vanalas its the best oh yeah the love making scenes oh fuck the shower scene

i was blushing at all the words nick said,its lyk he is my boyfriend since the characters are the same

damn that victoria we're ready for her fucking plan with that slut jake huh damn them

ur my favourite writer with best stories and i know more comments are coming dear keep it up

u give me difficulty in giving ur stories marks,although F.Y complex is the best i wonder how to award the rest damn u

make adrian fight for his marriage and i kno van u're good at revenge and the best always keep it up

oh take all my 5stars,love u vanalas

i request this to be unique interms of strategies,yah dont make adrian be dominated by culprits let them send fire and he too sends

hmmm how do u see when adrian makes nick wait for his body,yah yah make them play,make nick yearn for him to the extent wanting to rape him (hahaha romantic)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
so cul

thanx vanalas for that wonderful boboo

i really liked it dia plz be with it and yes the strategy was mwaaa,honeymoon mwaaa,ever the best

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
ofcourse this is my vanalas

everyday you keep on suprising me

yeah you're the best at this site

WHAT APLOT???

i dont have much to say i....iam speechless

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
First time for everything.

Ok, that didn't explain anything. Why didn't he call the police all the times he was beaten before he met Nicholas?

I'm really trying to stick this one out, but this is the first time I've read a series and skipped the sex scenes. Just too painful to read.

krystal71270krystal71270over 6 years ago
Tootin' your own horn

Pretty sure author is writing comments, read some of the best and learn

vanalasvanalasover 6 years agoAuthor
krystal71270 comment

With reference to the above reader, I'm really sorry but I don't comment on my own stories, ever. I leave it to my readers to comment. I might not be like the other authors but I'm still developing my writing skills and if you think that I wrote any of the comments then there is nothing I can do. just remember that even in other stories that other authors write there are also anon commenters.

no offence but I'm sorry you feel that I write my own comments. what can I achieve? Next thing I'll hear is that I also rate all my work too.

phew! I'm really sorry once again

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
wow i loved it

yah vanalas you're cool and i like the way you have dealt with him

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