by vanalas
Loving it as usual... Wish my man would marry me and take me on a honey moon like that!
thanx alot for that sweet honeymoon wow vanalas its the best oh yeah the love making scenes oh fuck the shower scene
i was blushing at all the words nick said,its lyk he is my boyfriend since the characters are the same
damn that victoria we're ready for her fucking plan with that slut jake huh damn them
ur my favourite writer with best stories and i know more comments are coming dear keep it up
u give me difficulty in giving ur stories marks,although F.Y complex is the best i wonder how to award the rest damn u
make adrian fight for his marriage and i kno van u're good at revenge and the best always keep it up
oh take all my 5stars,love u vanalas
i request this to be unique interms of strategies,yah dont make adrian be dominated by culprits let them send fire and he too sends
hmmm how do u see when adrian makes nick wait for his body,yah yah make them play,make nick yearn for him to the extent wanting to rape him (hahaha romantic)
thanx vanalas for that wonderful boboo
i really liked it dia plz be with it and yes the strategy was mwaaa,honeymoon mwaaa,ever the best
everyday you keep on suprising me
yeah you're the best at this site
WHAT APLOT???
i dont have much to say i....iam speechless
Ok, that didn't explain anything. Why didn't he call the police all the times he was beaten before he met Nicholas?
I'm really trying to stick this one out, but this is the first time I've read a series and skipped the sex scenes. Just too painful to read.
Pretty sure author is writing comments, read some of the best and learn
With reference to the above reader, I'm really sorry but I don't comment on my own stories, ever. I leave it to my readers to comment. I might not be like the other authors but I'm still developing my writing skills and if you think that I wrote any of the comments then there is nothing I can do. just remember that even in other stories that other authors write there are also anon commenters.
no offence but I'm sorry you feel that I write my own comments. what can I achieve? Next thing I'll hear is that I also rate all my work too.
phew! I'm really sorry once again
yah vanalas you're cool and i like the way you have dealt with him