All Comments on 'Standing Room Only (2023 Redux)'

Read and as I recall liked the original. Actually hoped to find original to draw comparison, but not necessary. Loved the way you started and ended this piece — mother and sassy daughter at both ends. What transpired between opening and closing was delightfully erotic. Loved the teasing, anonymity and the intense cubicle sex with the woman with no name. Then on the return journey somebody had a name and the rest is getting to know each is a passionately intimate way so well crafted. The daughters last line: “And believe me, from the look of the both of you, you're in up to your eyes." Captured it. Really enjoy your storylines and characters — creativity sustained across variety.

Good story, so much in such a short piece.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story and it was very erotic. I can dimly remember the original but cannot recall how it ended but that is no problem because this ending is perfect. Five stars.

Wish it was extended to after the first time

Nice! Chance of a chapter 2 with Eleanor joining?

Lovely indeed. Having heard horror stories from female friends of what can happen on crowded trains (especially one in Indonesia where there were fewer social "rules" about contact), this was a delightful occasion where the initial touching led to intimate acceptance and a future passionate liaison for the two women. I agree with Migbird below that the the presence of daughter Eleanor was a sweet bookend to the adventure. We need more from you. "Nature vs. Nurture" and "Table for Four" are two of my all time favorites.

Wow, a wonderful journey. Thank you for your imagination and skill.

Marvelous.

This is beautiful

Fantastic storie. It was good if a develompment of that storie.

I concur, part 2 with Eleanor is a must! Something about her cheeky flirting needs to be explored! Waiting eagerly for that!

A lovely, lovely story.

Still a fav, nice to have a reason to re-read. 5 stars, 'course.

Fantastic storie , more develompment please .

I love the details and your imagination , congratulations.

Stunning! A great story, written mistressfully 😀

I caught myself gasping at the conjoined g-strings, something I never knew I needed to know about 😀

Expect the unexpected and the world will be brighter ….. truthfully to the point ….. and words are not needed as mostly they forming misunderstandings ….. just kiss and enjoy ….. perfect

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