All Comments on 'Star Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Next Plz

great... want the next one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
keep it up

good work. check for typos in the next chapter; they're distracting sometimes. but great story and imagery. keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very good

Liked it a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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