by Cyndall
Very Nice--Very Believable--No Huge Cocks---No 38 DDD Boobs--Just two people in a totally believeable situation.
Not really a story. More a setup for some descriptions of sex. Like the other reviewer, it was refreshing not to find huge cocks, 38DDs, fishnets or whips. Just two people having good sex.
But it was just a setup...an excuse for the sex. You left too many questions for it to be a satisfying read. The questions leave the reader wondering if they missed something. For example, "But when it had been suggested that we spend some time alone together I jumped at the chance." Suggested by WHOM? One of their spouses? By her friend? If you throw something that key into a story, you have to resolve it.
Eric
A little snipet of real life. It is the part that makes the rest of life worth living. The ending was a nice place to pick up and go forward.
It was fun to read one that sounded like it could happen to anyone, anywhere.
Maybe her husband, and the other guy's wife were fucking like rabbits while they were having their lusty fuck together. i find it hard to believe however that the spouses could not tell that the two had something oing on between them. There is usually a certain "aura" after some hanky panky has gone on between married people.
You can just sense it, in the sexual tension between married partners fucking someone else spouses.
gary