All Comments on 'Star Trek Broken Bodice Ch. 01'

This was an excellent first chapter and I eagerly await the next one. Keep up the good work!

What an excellent story! I'm not even familiar with the Star Trek universe, but your exquisite descriptions of humiliation make this my favorite story I've read this year. You really know how to paint those ENF scenes vividly.

Favorited, and eagerly awaiting more from you.

when is part 2 comming?????

From the author: I apologise but the remaining 27 chapters of Broken Bodice cannot be uploaded here as literotica will not publish stories involving real-life people or copyrighted characters in non-consensual or reluctant situations.

You can find the rest on mr x home page

I was going to post a more updated version here on Literotica - fixes, edits, a few extra scenes. Email me at mickt80@hotmail.com and I can send you the series.

Deanna is a betazoid and as such would not be humiliated at being naked. Also Tpol would hide it a lot better.

This is a great story. I saw nothing unrealistic in the characters' reactions. T'Pol never was the best at controlling her emotional reactions by Vulcan standards so I thought this was a reasonable portrayal. As for Deanna, just because she's Betazoid doesn't mean she'd be comfortable being naked in all circumstances. Plenty of people who might be comfortable being naked in a nudist environment where it's not a big deal would still be uncomfortable being naked if they were in a public place or were being singled out and were getting stared at/groped (in "Menage a Troi" the Betazoid women didn't stay naked after their clothes were beamed off).

Not bad 10 stars to the power of 17 warp factor 15! I would totally buy T'Pol (to "rescue" her of course)