All Comments on 'Star Trek: Lineage Ch. 05'

You make me care about your characters. Voyager and Enterprise writers could have learned from that. :-P

What's this? A story that I find myself reading not for masturbatory purposes, but because it's pleasant to read and has engaging characters with stories that I'm interested in seeing continue? On Literotica? Well this is terribly confusing.

Seriously though, great work so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.