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This story was amazing all the way through l loved how you portrayed the characters made their struggles believable and heightened the story and sex scene. Well done
That was....seriously, I'm in love. I loved it. LOVED it. I could read that forever.
But absolutely incredible. This is an actual story, an epic in its own right. Brilliance. Don't ever stop writing.
I am completely mesmerized by this story! Awesome! I want so badly to see what happens to her! I want to know if they have a child! Oooooohhhh keep them coming!
I swear, even when I think you've given up the series, you post another hand have me begging for more. Please, please, please?
Not really a Star Wars fanfic fan, but I loved this. Great writing and a great story. Well done.
Would have preferred if you had split it into 2 parts - but that's a small quibble.
Please tell me there's more to this? Your story-telling is hypnotic! I was sucked in from the first paragraph, and it felt as if I were watching a film instead of reading a story. I truly hope you continue with the tale of the Dark Angel.
...and it was well worth the wait. Please don't take as long to write the next installment in your story. ;-)
Brilliant, amusing, clever and well written. Thank you for taking the trouble to write it!