Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Starchaser Ch. 04: Farpoint Welcome'

by storyteller4u2

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
acupacup4 months ago

The story is getting very interesting, looking forward to where you are taking it.

On a personal note, I find myself skipping ahead in the portions you switch points of view but repeat most of what has already been presented.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The story has promise I just find it extremely annoying having to read the same thing twice all the time.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userstoryteller4u2@storyteller4u2
12 Stories
52 Followers
Nonjudgmental and will not criticize, real married dad with DDlg tendencies, currently I do not have a little. Enjoy writing erotically with women especially one who is capable of creative well written ideas compatible to mine or who challenges me to match her writing.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Starchaser Ch. 03: The Pledge Previous Part
Starchaser Series Info