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Anonymousalmost 18 years agoDeveloping into a VERY good story.
The first 3 chapters were good but a little disjointed. This one is superb. I hope Chapter 5 appears soon.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoInteresting twist
Great story so far....Can't wait for chapter 5
Keep up the wonderful story!
txrosenaynayalmost 18 years agoExcellent....
very well written and great twist...can't wait to read on...respectfully fan in Texas naynay
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