All Comments on 'Staring at the Sun Ch. 08'

Very nice. The tension builds, What part does the very complicated Louise play in the plans of Jake? And are Lisa and Mike in on it? The most interesting story I've read on Lit in quite a while.

Louise, albeit a little late in the day, is trying to retake control of her own destiny. The true agenda of Jake, Jilly and Richard is becoming clearer but I still have my doubts about Mike's place in the scheme of things. Lisa may or may not be a friend and ally but I reserve judgement on this. Well done Jane, I am looking forward with anticipation to the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting quite so long this time. Pete.

This marvelous story explores the boundaries of temptation between two well meaning people. Written with empathy and not a little understanding, I found it an enjoyable read.

Well Written!

OK, my concerns in the last comment about the rather sudden decision to leave Richard are diminishing. Louise appears to be giving the issue the thought necessary and it looks less like an easy justification for a quick affair. Really looking forward to the rest!