Starship Traveler Ch. 06

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She had read all the major poets of the Kofandi and listened to them recite their poems. She still needed to read the subtitles, but Xeno had told her that some races just don't have the neurons or the hearing to learn to speak and understand Kofandi. Still to hear the words spoken by the poets themselves brought tears to her eyes. She had mastered the three dimensional strategy game and had actually won a couple of games. She was not sure if Xeno had let her win or not, but told herself he could not lie about such things.

Her love for Xeno had mellowed to a deep and lasting warmth. She did not dance or giggle as much, but she glowed with satisfaction. She very rarely asked what day it was. It did not matter anymore. Xeno had told her she was learning patience. She had laughed when he said that and responded, "Patience for a destination is not patience in bed."

He responded that she was just 146 years old, barely a child in his eyes. And she wrinkled up her nose and replied he had traveled across the universe to rob a cradle and that made him the worst of old perverts.

The ship had been feeding for almost ten years when Xeno looked up in surprise and commented, "Another Traveler has entered this zone. We have company, pretty mind."

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The end and the beginning. I am sure I will bring you the further adventures of Xeno and Revekah but this seems like a good time to take a break. After all we have all the time in the multiverse.

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Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Please do me the kindness of rating and leaving me feedback. Constructive and/or critical, public or private, raving or troll; I love to hear from you.

To those who leave anonymous feedback, I regret I cannot respond to you individually. Please accept my appreciation in advance.

I would like to acknowledge and thank my editor Dani for all her help. She is a treasure.

xantu

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Pretty ho-hum and so what boring. Needs some kind of actiosurroundings. Not just a continuous dialog of how the woman slowly adjusts to the alien and her new surroundings.

drgonhunterdrgonhunterover 4 years ago
More Please

This is not only a comment on this chapter but on the story as a whole so far. I really love it. It's a very thoroughly written one that focuses on more then only action or sex.

I hope you will write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A beautiful mind

Thank you for sharing this story. it triggered many emotions and deep thoughts. Again thank you.

thomaslovecraftthomaslovecraftover 7 years ago

Story is so beautiful and touching that I nearly cried, especially when she wanted to let go of her previous life to love xeno. I have a small request though, can you write a short and detailed story on how erm, they mated? I love monster erotica and this would be cherry on top. Thanks!

cmsheaffcmsheaffover 8 years ago
Imaginative

Very sweet and clever. Well written, nicely developed and nicely paced. Thank you for the diversion. I look forward to a follow up story set 80,000 years in the future when they go back to earth to get a new member for a ménage a troit. Being enough time for enough generations to have allowed some evolution of the human species they find some surprises. I'm sure your imagination can flesh out the rest.

😊

icebreadicebreadabout 9 years ago
More please.

Exelent, thank you. See above..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Star love

A lovely story, more about love than sex. I recently lost my wife of 37 years, and her tender memories of her husband are very moving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
NOOOOOo not the end!! write MORE please!!!

well done!

EdscribblingsEdscribblingsabout 12 years ago
Thanks for the ride

I’ve been thinking a lot about this story. The living space was unlike anything I’ve ever read, great novel idea for an alien setting. Spending 150 years in a little foggy swamp with a slimy mind-reader might be considered torture. In her place I’m not sure if I’d be grateful, flattered, or resentful. The ending was both sweet and disgusting, a difficult pair.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Amazing Story!!!

Read all six chapter in one gulp!

jthardyjthardyover 13 years ago
Wonderful

I think this story is really good and look forward to the next chapter

bumd11bumd11over 15 years ago
A beautiful tale

This was such a lovely story. It was so original, so inventive in even the smallest details; I was often brought up in amazement at how basic technical issues were resolved. But what kept me reading most of all was the two characters. Once I forgave Xeno for the abduction, I grew to appreciate so much his gentle and loving nature. And Revekah: could there be a finer representative of humanity to send to other worlds?

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Beautifully crafted sci fi tale

This was such a joy to read. I appreciate your dedication to detail in the exploration of sensory and emotional communication between Revekah and Xeno. It is amazing that your story used such a gentle pace yet felt quite rivetting and engaging throughout. I found their shared internal dialogue and exploration quite erotic as you unfolded a new aspect of their connection. I do hope there will be a Starship Traveler Part 2. thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Changed mind

I am not a fan of sci-fi and almost didn't start reading this series. But I am so glad I did. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
so many layers...

i enjoyed this story of understanding,hope and love very much.it had plenty of rich background details,with an interesting storyline.i adore tales with a devote male. one who is willing to wait,woo and work for his female's acceptance.the key to this unconventional relationship was communication.a lovely fable as per usual,ms xantu.thank you very much.annay.

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