by Abby_Normal_7
Though the "quarterback and cheerleader going to seed" stuff is a *bit* of a cliche, you made the characters quite real and believable. Well done!! Looking forward to reading more.
This was such a sweet story! I found it very arousing because the characters really seemed to care for each other as well as find each other sexy.
You write with just enough of the real issues thrown in that I have to believe in you. Warm, comfortable, and easily believable. Statistics is such a grind for a liberal arts major. Keep up your classy submissions.