All Comments on 'Stay Away from Her'

Oooh that was a smoking hot turn of events

Just wondering is there a part two?

oh man this could be more, right? not trying to pressure you into making a part two but this dynamic would be amazing for a follow up cause this made me very horny. i found it interesting that todd seemed to have known something about jesse beforehand like he knew exactly what was happening to jesse when inciting the fight. good gaydar?

What the hell was that shit?

Kinda hope to see more parts, it was that hot.

FUCKING HELL!!! I'm absolutely hard as a rock right now. I know this should be considered sexual assault, but for some reason it doesn't feel like it. It seemed more like Dom/Sub roll play. There're so many questions that need to be answered in this HOT story. Hopefully you'll continue it and tie up the loose ends for us. Thanks, MLF

2 asshole cunts, Chrissy and Todd

This isn’t hot. A guy that Jesse hates enters his apartment, reveals he has a key to that apartment, refuses to return it when requested by the owner, a physical fight ensues, Jesse is physically overtaken by Todd, who proceeds to rape Jesse first by fucking himself on Jesse’s cock, then by actually fucking Jesse, all while Jesse screams his non-consent. This is criminal and Jesse needs to dump Chrissy and cut her and her psycho best friend out of his life. Call the damn police! Also it pretty likely Todd is fucking Chrissy since he knows his way around their night stand pretty well. Geez.

This is not straight to gay. This is rape plain and simple.

Part 2 please … i love their chemistry

Yep, Chrissy would be out on her ass. She'd come back from her mother's with her shit on the lawn and the locks chained.

I might do Todd again, but she broke a big rule, "You're outta here!"

I would have let Todd leave with the key then call a locksmith to change the locks. Just saying.

Please keep writing! I want to see what happens next between Todd and Jesse.

Lol why hate-read a whole story just to make a comment narrating everything in hopes to discourage the author? this is a place for every kind of taste. you don't like the content? you don't have anything constructive to say? move on! dubious/non-consent is not prohibited in this site, morons.

OK, Guys, let's look at everything with clear eyes here. I just reread this story and it doesn't seem like rape to me. Jesse could have stopped this if he really wanted to. It looked to me like he wanted to be forced to have sex as a submissive. This read like he was getting into it, and how many victims kiss a rapist goodbye? What I want to know is why was the house key on Todd's keyring. If Chrissy had just given it to him, wouldn't it be by itself, so he could give it back to her. And how did Todd know what drawer the lube and condoms were in. All that being said, I'd definitely kick Chrissy's ass to the curb and be changing the locks that day. But none of this really matters unless Acerbicscribbler continues the story. .) MLF

Kind of funny how many readers don't understand what fiction is, and erotic fiction (where different people have different turn-ons) at that. It's like reading a supernatural horror novel and then being disgusted that there's a supernatural element in it.

Somehow I get the vibe that the story should be be filmed by Disruptive. They would love the work.

Seems to me Todd is a relationship therapist. Kinda couples councilor but one at a time. Nothing rapey here. Dominance? Submission? Yes. Unwelcome? Meh. Chrissy will remain Chrissy. Jesse is changed. Todd is a cartoon villain. Hot!

I thought this was quite original and well-done.