All Comments on 'Staying After Class'

For this short story. Thanks for sharing.

This was merely as outline for a story - just a skeleton with very little flesh.

Develop your characters!

Build intrigue!

Introduce conflict!

Then you might have a story.

It was rushed but still very erotic and it would be great to read more about their time together!

A very nice bit of mind fuckery going on there as well, I love this kind of ‘taboo’. Social conventions say no but everyone’s of age and very willing! So hot

Thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)